【注释】： ① 万山：襄阳西北十里，又称方山、蔓山、汉皋山等。一作“兰山”，误。张五：一作张子容，兄弟排行不对，张子容排行第八。 ② 北山：万山在襄阳以北。 ③ 试：一作“始”。“心随”一句：又作“心飞逐鸟灭”、“心随飞雁灭”、“心随鸟飞灭”等。 ④ 清秋：一作“清境”。 ⑤ 平沙：又作“沙行”。 ⑥ 舟：又作“洲”。 【评析】： 这是一首临秋登高远望，怀念旧友的诗。开头四句，先点自悦，然后登山望张 五；五、六两句点明秋天节气；七、八两句写登山望见山下之人；九、十两句，写远 望所见；最后两句写自己的希望。 全诗情随景生，以景烘情，情景交融，浑为一体。“情飘逸而真挚，景情淡而优 美。”诗人怀故友而登高，望飞雁而孤寂，临薄暮而惆怅，处清秋而发兴，自然希望 挚友到来一起共度佳节。“愁因薄暮起，兴是清秋发”，“天边树若荠，江畔洲如 月”，细细品尝，够人玩味。 ON CLIMBING ORCHID MOUNTAIN IN THE AUTUMN TO ZHANG On a northern peak among white clouds You have found your hermitage of peace; And now, as I climb this mountain to see you, High with the wildgeese flies my heart. The quiet dusk might seem a little sad If this autumn weather were not so brisk and clear; I look down at the river bank, with homeward-bound villagers Resting on the sand till the ferry returns; There are trees at the horizon like a row of grasses And against the river's rim an island like the moon I hope that you will come and meet me, bringing a basket of wine -- And we'll celebrate together the Mountain Holiday.